im trying not to read it cause then i will want to try a story...aah wth, ill read it anyway :p

__________________________
knowing is half the battle, violence is the other half.

hmmm, verrrry interesting. keep it up, its comming along nicely
it kinda feels like a mix btwn earthclan and homeworld, which is a good thing ^_^
also i know what its like to not get noticed after writing an awesome piece of literature, just remember that your audience is just as important as the story, if not more.

__________________________
knowing is half the battle, violence is the other half.

chapter three is up. Its the last chapter I wrote back in january,so its about time I start writing again.

__________________________
10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.